Excellent story. You must continue this with more chapters. She needs to leave the loser husband, come home to dad with the kids and live happily ever after raising their children.
Add more!!!!! It's really great. Talk about more sex between them and how they plan to raise the baby and what is the gender and how much they love each, It was really good.
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Anonymous03/13/15
Chapter Two
My daughter got pregnant after staying with me for a week; With at least fucking twice a day. Gary thought it was his baby. Then she gave birth to a pretty baby girl who's growing up calling me Grandpa. My daughter knew that I was a naughty dirty old man. She knew what I liked. I had to give all of my properties, whatever I owned to my daughter on my will, to have her permission to teach my grand-daughter, oh my little daughter, a precious lesson how to enjoy life! I hope my seeds are still strong enough to make another baby who would either, correctly, calls me grandpa or great-grandpa!
:-)
Often times, my sister and I discuss having daddy's baby. Since we live with him, he fucks us multiple times a day. We are on the pill but could easily discontinue its use. Always, common sense prevails and we conclude its not a good idea. But if we ever do decide to get pregnant, it will definitely be his.
4 stars, two thumbs up
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Anonymous03/16/15
Why in the hell are babies being discussed in this crap?
Please explain to me what the author, and I use that term lightly, finds sexually appealing about deformed or mentally slow children? The bs of having children with a family member is not erotic and I will never understand how it ends up added into any story. I would suggest the people who ask for the incest babies are more into darker topics as the comment about chapter two suggests. In order to get at the child he had to bribe the mother or was blackmailed by her.
I couldn't care less what two consenting adults do together but leave the innocent children out of it. This story also suggests the daughter was not of the age to give legal consent when her father began to have relations with her. There is nothing sexy about being with a child and ephebophilia is not sexy unless you are a criminal or predator.
Keep writing please !! Just Need more in-story content
In a nut shell (no pun intended) this is how all my fantasies regarding this subject matter end in all 3 of my Story arcs; Them being 1. mother -son 2.father-daughter 3. brother-sister. Everybodys different when it comes to how many pages they prefer these stories to be, I personally think 3 is the max, maybe 4 depending on quality. Anymore than 4 gets to be too long and concentration suffers greatly. 2 1/2-3 pages of a well crafted and balanced story that is reasonably realistic in nature, seems to be the perfect ratio for me. Keep those ideas and notions of a real LOVE between ur characters alive and concentrate on story length using 3 page optimum length base to buld on>
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Excellent story. You must continue this with more chapters. She needs to leave the loser husband, come home to dad with the kids and live happily ever after raising their children.
Please add more
Add more!!!!! It's really great. Talk about more sex between them and how they plan to raise the baby and what is the gender and how much they love each, It was really good.
Chapter Two
My daughter got pregnant after staying with me for a week; With at least fucking twice a day. Gary thought it was his baby. Then she gave birth to a pretty baby girl who's growing up calling me Grandpa. My daughter knew that I was a naughty dirty old man. She knew what I liked. I had to give all of my properties, whatever I owned to my daughter on my will, to have her permission to teach my grand-daughter, oh my little daughter, a precious lesson how to enjoy life! I hope my seeds are still strong enough to make another baby who would either, correctly, calls me grandpa or great-grandpa!
:-)
yes add more please
i love it please add more cant wait to read more
Another clueless derp writing in present tense. Fuqqin' dumb!
More More More
I enjoyed the story. I hope you will have more chapters about these two.
Let's have more
Often times, my sister and I discuss having daddy's baby. Since we live with him, he fucks us multiple times a day. We are on the pill but could easily discontinue its use. Always, common sense prevails and we conclude its not a good idea. But if we ever do decide to get pregnant, it will definitely be his.
4 stars, two thumbs up
Why in the hell are babies being discussed in this crap?
Please explain to me what the author, and I use that term lightly, finds sexually appealing about deformed or mentally slow children? The bs of having children with a family member is not erotic and I will never understand how it ends up added into any story. I would suggest the people who ask for the incest babies are more into darker topics as the comment about chapter two suggests. In order to get at the child he had to bribe the mother or was blackmailed by her.
I couldn't care less what two consenting adults do together but leave the innocent children out of it. This story also suggests the daughter was not of the age to give legal consent when her father began to have relations with her. There is nothing sexy about being with a child and ephebophilia is not sexy unless you are a criminal or predator.
1*
Sucked
Keep writing please !! Just Need more in-story content
In a nut shell (no pun intended) this is how all my fantasies regarding this subject matter end in all 3 of my Story arcs; Them being 1. mother -son 2.father-daughter 3. brother-sister. Everybodys different when it comes to how many pages they prefer these stories to be, I personally think 3 is the max, maybe 4 depending on quality. Anymore than 4 gets to be too long and concentration suffers greatly. 2 1/2-3 pages of a well crafted and balanced story that is reasonably realistic in nature, seems to be the perfect ratio for me. Keep those ideas and notions of a real LOVE between ur characters alive and concentrate on story length using 3 page optimum length base to buld on>
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