I think you need to keep going with this and see if you might add a friend or two of his into the mix. I loved the story do not get me wrong I just think as it goes along more guys needed added to the mix. To show him that you can attract more than just him Maybe you can show him how dirty this really looks, but his perverted mind loves it and wants you to continue. You be the judge as this is your story and you know where you want it to go. I am looking forward to more chapters.
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Anonymous03/13/15
Interesting kink. Have to remember it is between husband and wife, only.
If they both enjoy her playing the role of his high class personal prostitute, that's their business. No cruelty, humiliation, betrayal, or disrespect. In fact, just the opposite. I infer he loves and respects her very much. Being exclusive to him, she is not really playing the role of prostitute, but rather mistress, or concubine. So again, if it works for them, and stays loving and civilized, more power to them. I am withholding voting till I see where this goes, and ends.
Hateful, disrespectful, humiliating sex is not exciting to normal people. I hope this is a story for normal people. If not, I'm sure you'll get high marks from Bonnie. Or Ronnie, or Johnny, or . . .
Looks to be a great beginning, please continue with "Penny's" adventures.
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Anonymous03/13/15
Wrong category
1*
Another shitty day for Loving wife.
by
Anonymous03/13/15
Is anyone really this dumb?
Okay. This is fiction. But it's BAD fiction. What kind of pervert wants his wife to be a prostitute? What kind of brainless wife would agree? Forget the prospects of disease, pregnancy or discovery and jail time. What about the violence? What if she chooses the wrong man and either ends up in the hospital or the morgue? Even for fiction this was a ridiculous storyline. Don't waste our time with any more chapters. Negative 5 stars.
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Anonymous03/13/15
dear annony. There you go again!!!!
it's fiction you in creditable dumb fucking asshole. gave it a 5 for your effort
This wasn't a bad part, because between husband and wife all fantasies are allowed...But 12 parts of this? I don't believe it...So soon I hope this story will not go down to the sewer...3* for now...
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Anonymous03/13/15
It's great that they as are happily married and are having fun with only each other. That's the way it supposed to be . Not like these other stories where the wife get it from someone else and it's the best ever and hubby is happy watching. Totally not real most men would snap with a lot of collateral damage to clean up. Hope story continues in the same direction you have with just them
I see the anonymous brigade are throwing their toys out the pram again, why do they read here (maybe it is read to them), if a story is not to your taste then say so with some constructive criticism. Interesting start, it is one of those stories that could go either way, by that I mean will this story develop the characters of a close couple on a journey of exploration with the highs and lows or simply fuck fest chapters, I hope the former, good start though.
It will be a shame if this becomes the typical loving wives trope-- wife/couple need greater excitement and burn down their marriage by bringing others in. 12 chapters will be hard to sustain and it will be a shame to see this couple devolve.
We all know this is going down the sewer. Probably sooner rather than later. She already thinking about what she's worth on open market. Slut/cuck/sewer here we come. I'm not scoring this yet. When it does go south, I'll give the star it's worth.
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Anonymous03/14/15
re:fifteen16
What's it to you asshole? Anybody can voice an opinion, regardless if they have a fake name like you or not. So shut the fuck up. Comment on the story and then fuck off, idiot.
My wife and I try that once in awhile as well, nothing wrong with a little fantasy and it's fun for both of us.
I like how she describes the sex as fun at first but in time a little sore and tiring. I don't have a 9 incher and the wife gets sore as well so I can only imagine what a schlong that size would do.
Hopefully this doesn't become the stereotypical cuck husband/cheating wife thing but so far so good.
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Anonymous03/14/15
Boy, this brings back memories ...
My wife has always exerted a lazy, laughing control over the sex in our marriage, doling out favors on her terms and with considerably less frequency than my higher sex drive would prefer. I started out sexually submissive, and years of her passive power play have only made me more so. Perhaps it's not surprising, then, that when she once joked that she should make me pay for it, I eagerly latched onto the idea. She agreed to give it a try. We got in bed, me naked and stiffly eager, she nude only from the waist down and coolly amused, as usual. She pondered as to a price, and came up with $40. I grabbed my wallet and handed the cash over. She proceeded with our standard foreplay, starting with one of her patented slow, distracted handjobs, in which I writhe and moan under her negligent one-handed stimulation while she seemingly pays little attention. (Blowjobs, of course, were permanently phased out many years ago.) I responded even more vocally than usual, thanks to the perverse excitement of having paid forty bucks for the familiar but delightful touch of her "magic, lazy hand" (as I have named it). She stopped when my cries of frustrated pleasure reached rare peaks, laughing that she should charge me another $40 if it was that good. I scrambled from bed and fumblingly tendered two more twenties. She laughed again, delightedly, and proceeded to permit me to go down on her, always my favorite and most anticipated sex act -- she takes her time building to her orgasm, letting me gasp and pant and lick desperately for as long as it takes. We finished with the standard missionary intercourse, during which she usually cums repeatedly while still seeming somehow in complete control of the proceedings. My own orgasm was even more roaringly explosive than usual, fueled by the eighty dollars I had just paid for the privilege of these familiar intimacies with my own wife.
by
Anonymous03/15/15
Interesting and somewhat sad.......
.....in that the mismatch in sex drive puts their marriage at risk...that he went this way to excite her to the point of taking care of him whenever he wants, is at least a compromise intended to keep them together and happy(?).
I take it that the 275 "hooker" events in the last year are in addition to the "regular" sex, so they still get busy at least once a day.
If you do the math, he must be making truly epic money, to have that kind of disposable cash. She may end up making more than him....after they have an argument and she goes off to sulk....and ends up propositioned and goes for it for revenge. That could get her out on her ass pretty quick, or he might turn her out to augment the income and free him to go find some variety..perhabs his PA at work....
by
Anonymous03/15/15
re: 1 of 12 parts?
That's an inherent problem with this story. If this stays true to the opening, that he's been her only client, getting 12 chapters out of it seems farfetched. It's hard to see how the chapters can't be redundant. If it doesn't then the opening is a lie. Neither option is good.
by
Anonymous08/13/15
lowlife people are not erotic.
There are not any prostitute not into the drug scene, just total horseshit.
Personal whore
I think you need to keep going with this and see if you might add a friend or two of his into the mix. I loved the story do not get me wrong I just think as it goes along more guys needed added to the mix. To show him that you can attract more than just him Maybe you can show him how dirty this really looks, but his perverted mind loves it and wants you to continue. You be the judge as this is your story and you know where you want it to go. I am looking forward to more chapters.
Interesting kink. Have to remember it is between husband and wife, only.
If they both enjoy her playing the role of his high class personal prostitute, that's their business. No cruelty, humiliation, betrayal, or disrespect. In fact, just the opposite. I infer he loves and respects her very much. Being exclusive to him, she is not really playing the role of prostitute, but rather mistress, or concubine. So again, if it works for them, and stays loving and civilized, more power to them. I am withholding voting till I see where this goes, and ends.
Hateful, disrespectful, humiliating sex is not exciting to normal people. I hope this is a story for normal people. If not, I'm sure you'll get high marks from Bonnie. Or Ronnie, or Johnny, or . . .
great start
There are untold possibilities here without other people involved. The intro says it's only them and staying that way would be terrific
Fun story
Looks to be a great beginning, please continue with "Penny's" adventures.
Wrong category
1*
Another shitty day for Loving wife.
Is anyone really this dumb?
Okay. This is fiction. But it's BAD fiction. What kind of pervert wants his wife to be a prostitute? What kind of brainless wife would agree? Forget the prospects of disease, pregnancy or discovery and jail time. What about the violence? What if she chooses the wrong man and either ends up in the hospital or the morgue? Even for fiction this was a ridiculous storyline. Don't waste our time with any more chapters. Negative 5 stars.
dear annony. There you go again!!!!
it's fiction you in creditable dumb fucking asshole. gave it a 5 for your effort
1 of 12 parts?
This wasn't a bad part, because between husband and wife all fantasies are allowed...But 12 parts of this? I don't believe it...So soon I hope this story will not go down to the sewer...3* for now...
It's great that they as are happily married and are having fun with only each other. That's the way it supposed to be . Not like these other stories where the wife get it from someone else and it's the best ever and hubby is happy watching. Totally not real most men would snap with a lot of collateral damage to clean up. Hope story continues in the same direction you have with just them
Toys
I see the anonymous brigade are throwing their toys out the pram again, why do they read here (maybe it is read to them), if a story is not to your taste then say so with some constructive criticism. Interesting start, it is one of those stories that could go either way, by that I mean will this story develop the characters of a close couple on a journey of exploration with the highs and lows or simply fuck fest chapters, I hope the former, good start though.
I share impo_60's concern
It will be a shame if this becomes the typical loving wives trope-- wife/couple need greater excitement and burn down their marriage by bringing others in. 12 chapters will be hard to sustain and it will be a shame to see this couple devolve.
One can only hope for the best I guess.
enjoyed it thoroughly !
Role playing and keeping it exclusive -.where's the harm ? Too short for a five , but this was a well crafted , flash story. ****
Come on People!!!
We all know this is going down the sewer. Probably sooner rather than later. She already thinking about what she's worth on open market. Slut/cuck/sewer here we come. I'm not scoring this yet. When it does go south, I'll give the star it's worth.
re:fifteen16
What's it to you asshole? Anybody can voice an opinion, regardless if they have a fake name like you or not. So shut the fuck up. Comment on the story and then fuck off, idiot.
I like the premise so far!
My wife and I try that once in awhile as well, nothing wrong with a little fantasy and it's fun for both of us.
I like how she describes the sex as fun at first but in time a little sore and tiring. I don't have a 9 incher and the wife gets sore as well so I can only imagine what a schlong that size would do.
Hopefully this doesn't become the stereotypical cuck husband/cheating wife thing but so far so good.
Boy, this brings back memories ...
My wife has always exerted a lazy, laughing control over the sex in our marriage, doling out favors on her terms and with considerably less frequency than my higher sex drive would prefer. I started out sexually submissive, and years of her passive power play have only made me more so. Perhaps it's not surprising, then, that when she once joked that she should make me pay for it, I eagerly latched onto the idea. She agreed to give it a try. We got in bed, me naked and stiffly eager, she nude only from the waist down and coolly amused, as usual. She pondered as to a price, and came up with $40. I grabbed my wallet and handed the cash over. She proceeded with our standard foreplay, starting with one of her patented slow, distracted handjobs, in which I writhe and moan under her negligent one-handed stimulation while she seemingly pays little attention. (Blowjobs, of course, were permanently phased out many years ago.) I responded even more vocally than usual, thanks to the perverse excitement of having paid forty bucks for the familiar but delightful touch of her "magic, lazy hand" (as I have named it). She stopped when my cries of frustrated pleasure reached rare peaks, laughing that she should charge me another $40 if it was that good. I scrambled from bed and fumblingly tendered two more twenties. She laughed again, delightedly, and proceeded to permit me to go down on her, always my favorite and most anticipated sex act -- she takes her time building to her orgasm, letting me gasp and pant and lick desperately for as long as it takes. We finished with the standard missionary intercourse, during which she usually cums repeatedly while still seeming somehow in complete control of the proceedings. My own orgasm was even more roaringly explosive than usual, fueled by the eighty dollars I had just paid for the privilege of these familiar intimacies with my own wife.
Interesting and somewhat sad.......
.....in that the mismatch in sex drive puts their marriage at risk...that he went this way to excite her to the point of taking care of him whenever he wants, is at least a compromise intended to keep them together and happy(?).
I take it that the 275 "hooker" events in the last year are in addition to the "regular" sex, so they still get busy at least once a day.
If you do the math, he must be making truly epic money, to have that kind of disposable cash. She may end up making more than him....after they have an argument and she goes off to sulk....and ends up propositioned and goes for it for revenge. That could get her out on her ass pretty quick, or he might turn her out to augment the income and free him to go find some variety..perhabs his PA at work....
re: 1 of 12 parts?
That's an inherent problem with this story. If this stays true to the opening, that he's been her only client, getting 12 chapters out of it seems farfetched. It's hard to see how the chapters can't be redundant. If it doesn't then the opening is a lie. Neither option is good.
lowlife people are not erotic.
There are not any prostitute not into the drug scene, just total horseshit.
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