You have a compelling plot idea here. So far, great, and uplifting! Kinky respectful married sex. Who knew?
You are exploring a premise that many LW fans seem to miss, or even reject: Married sex is limited only by the imagination, courage, and honesty of the spouses. The novelty and excitement of an illicit sexual fling has to be enjoyed as a break from a boring unsatisfying marriage. If you own a luxury sedan or a fine sports car you don't go rent a junker for a short joy ride. I believe it is well documented that most acts of infidelity are merely symptoms of deeper problems in the marriage, or in the personality of one of the spouses. You are portraying here two partners who have no serious marital problem, but who want to park the luxury sedan and play with some alternative vehicles, simply for the fun of it. So they MUTUALLY decided to enhance their partnership by indulging in fantasies that, if real, would wreck their marriage. It's almost like the owners of a bank closing the business down at night, setting up the props and actors they need, then acting out some fantasy to rob the bank! What a harmless farce.
There is so much more to say. You have totally captured my interest in this story, because it is fun, exciting, and intriguing. How will it continue? Will they be able to keep their fantasy within the bounds of their marriage vows? Will they allow the fantasy to wreck their marriage? You have, I hope, achieved with me what every author should want. An eager interested reader who can't wait to turn the page. But again, if you abandon the honest fun and love so far portrayed between this couple, it will be so disappointing. And a real opportunity missed to show nonbelievers that marriage is not about shallow short-term imagined thrills that you give up, but about long term real fun and excitement that you can share forever. Couples create their own possibilities, and their own limitations.
This storyline is so ignored here, but it has so much potential. Married hot, kinky sex, with just these two involved is such a powerful set of possibilities. Keep going!
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Anonymous03/14/15
A great expansion to the sex life of a happily married couple. This is how it should be in real life and the divorce rates would go way down . Talk , explore, have fun and live a long happy married life. Looking forward to reading more fun tales of the two of you
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You have a compelling plot idea here. So far, great, and uplifting! Kinky respectful married sex. Who knew?
You are exploring a premise that many LW fans seem to miss, or even reject: Married sex is limited only by the imagination, courage, and honesty of the spouses. The novelty and excitement of an illicit sexual fling has to be enjoyed as a break from a boring unsatisfying marriage. If you own a luxury sedan or a fine sports car you don't go rent a junker for a short joy ride. I believe it is well documented that most acts of infidelity are merely symptoms of deeper problems in the marriage, or in the personality of one of the spouses. You are portraying here two partners who have no serious marital problem, but who want to park the luxury sedan and play with some alternative vehicles, simply for the fun of it. So they MUTUALLY decided to enhance their partnership by indulging in fantasies that, if real, would wreck their marriage. It's almost like the owners of a bank closing the business down at night, setting up the props and actors they need, then acting out some fantasy to rob the bank! What a harmless farce.
There is so much more to say. You have totally captured my interest in this story, because it is fun, exciting, and intriguing. How will it continue? Will they be able to keep their fantasy within the bounds of their marriage vows? Will they allow the fantasy to wreck their marriage? You have, I hope, achieved with me what every author should want. An eager interested reader who can't wait to turn the page. But again, if you abandon the honest fun and love so far portrayed between this couple, it will be so disappointing. And a real opportunity missed to show nonbelievers that marriage is not about shallow short-term imagined thrills that you give up, but about long term real fun and excitement that you can share forever. Couples create their own possibilities, and their own limitations.
great storyline
This storyline is so ignored here, but it has so much potential. Married hot, kinky sex, with just these two involved is such a powerful set of possibilities. Keep going!
A great expansion to the sex life of a happily married couple. This is how it should be in real life and the divorce rates would go way down . Talk , explore, have fun and live a long happy married life. Looking forward to reading more fun tales of the two of you
Still a good story....
Still a good story about a couple's games to have fun...3*
Fun
Good fun read, another ten chapters to come, can't wait to see where it goes.
you had me at 'strappy sandals'
it's getting weird, but its only a story. Full marks. *****
boring
boring because the wife is selfish throughout if not just dumb
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