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I really enjoyed this
Nice dream for you to do for a friend. Made my morning even wetter thank you... Love your detail, what a great birthday gift....
Question ! ! !
When you write a story for someone else as you say this one was done, do you send them a copy first so they can give you some private feedback first and possible have you make minor changes if it doesn't quite fill the bill? I appreciate how hard it can be to make up a good story and have it come out as you want, let alone as someone else wants...
Very enjoyable read... the only thing I would suggest is to use a spell/grammer checker so you use the correct words throughout the story. (See the line "You should did handle us. I haven't had a good fuck like that in a long time." )
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