All Comments on 'The Conception Deception Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Ah this is beautiful

bogusguybogusguyabout 9 years ago
great!

Eagerly awaiting next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Nice story, waiting for the next delivery! Best of luck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good concept

Nice idea, a way of getting people to talk about what having sex means .. how people have different views on this.

So far, it would have worked without the deception .. him lying about (maybe) being infertile. There are two ways in which this plot element can be taken further .. and I wonder which path the author will follow.

bruce22bruce22about 9 years ago
Fascinating Inversion

It sounds like she only had sex before and no love. I believe that forgetting the lube the second time was deliberate.

dgfergiedgfergieover 3 years ago
funny

Maybe she's never had a sexual partner that really cared?

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