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by Anonymous

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by Drbeamer333303/14/15

Enjoyed it

thanks for the offering.

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by betrayedbylove03/14/15

Oh Yeah

Only you can turn a cuck tale into a work of art. Great job Brit.

Five Stars

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by tazz31703/14/15

NOT ALL GUTTER SNIPES

can be Pygmallion or Eliza D. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by lance_spearman03/14/15

Not one of your better efforts

IMHO. Sorry, you've done much better...

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by lance_spearman03/14/15

Not one of your better stories

IMHO. You've done much better....

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by Bill110403/14/15

Not one of your best

It was over before it started.

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by icebread03/14/15

Where?

Where were the next pages? If you are going to write a story the least you could do is finish it. *

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by RePhil03/14/15

Loved it

Nice turn!

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by RePhil03/14/15

Great snap shot story

What fun! Thanks for sharing

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by senorlongo03/14/15

Clever

I enjoyed to bit of misdirection--the visualizing of Juliette as James' wife until the revelation at the end. The way it ended there are still ways it could be continued. Yes, very clever.

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by thecarolinadreamer03/14/15

****

Good story. It had me thrown as to just whose wife she was. I just love the ending. Would have called it great if a little longer and I must say, I usually like my smut just a bit smuttier. Good work!

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by bruce2203/14/15

Fine Flash Story

I get the feeling that some people only accept three page stories with an introduction and epilogue. This was a pleasure to read!

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by zed003/14/15

I read it anyway!

I don't like stories about wimps being cuckolded, but I read it anyway!
Sure glad I did, one of your best yet. Very complete short story, without feeling like an incomplete "Flash" story.

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by impo_6003/14/15

Another good story...

Another good story from you...short and to the point...4*

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by carvohi03/15/15

Ho hum...

Didn't vote.

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by chytown03/15/15

Thanks***

For sharing

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by laptopwriter03/15/15

I have a feeling...

a lot of people didn't read this to the end--hence the low score. This was a great little story and warrants a much higher score.

Great Job.

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by seekeraz03/15/15

@laptopwriter It was a clever end...

... but not a satisfying one for me, which probably says more about me than the story.

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by Harryin VA03/16/15

i have no idea what the fuck this was about

really ... I was unable any of this

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by robindavisfiction03/16/15

Excellent story!

Congratulations. This is worthy of publication just about anywhere, including in one of those snooty little literary journals. By this observation, I intend only the highest regard for your story while sarcastically demeaning readers who don't know perfumed crap from truffles.

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by Britease03/17/15

Don't worry Harry

It was a bit above your intelligence level I fear. I'll try to do a simple one for you. 'Once upon a time' ….. You get the message?

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by bonnietaylor203/17/15

yea Harry is aa fuck bubble that's for sure. If he puit in as much time writing his own story

as he does bitching about others, he have a 100 stories on here! I think he
s dear annony's bastard love child

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by Britease03/18/15

Thank you bonnie

A thorn in the side indeed, but if I'm being honest, then I would miss Harry . Stupid I know, but we all have our soft side.

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