All Comments on 'Confession Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Such a good story!! I couldn't wait for chapter 2 and I'm looking forward to chapter 3! Keep writing!!

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
Wow incredibly hot

Love this story it is so hot and arousing I have to go change my undies. Your attention to detail is on point. Love to see where they go next and to see what Tara is up to..... Keep up the great writing...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting story

Quite a few women have fantasy of seducing priest. Many like to tease with "accidental" flashing and rubbing. Some do succeed

PhilosopherXPhilosopherXabout 9 years ago
Good story

I think you're a talented writer and this is a good story, but part two is missing some of the tension and reservation of the first part. Where's the Catholic guilt as a background that makes this kind of plot so deliciously hot? I would recommend more conflictedness for your characters.

William smythWilliam smythabout 9 years ago
Fascinating!!

Very well written.

Blasphemous perhaps and interestingly so.

Looking forward to the next chapter. It's been all 5 star so far.

bearsladybearsladyabout 9 years ago

Can't believe I almost missed this. Good thing I was having trouble falling asleep.

The heat in this chapter just about fried my circuit board! Very hot and well done.

My only criticism is the young girl in this story goes from shy, guilt ridden virgin to 'able to deepthroat, ride-me-wild', screaming orgasmic, questioning my faith woman pretty darn fast.

If I rate this chapter as a stand alone, I'd go with a 5. If I rate it as Ch 2, I'd go a 3. I like your writing, just slow the emotional pace down a smidge.

Lovelove506Lovelove506about 9 years ago
OH GOD

SO FUCKING HOT

YourKittenElleYourKittenElleabout 9 years ago

I've just read both your chapters and have to say they've really done it for me <3 That said, the second one might have been a lot more teasing still, and not so jumping on to it. She felt a bit too comfortable for a virgin but tbh it was still super hot :) Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Looking... Waiting...

Where is chapter 3?!

InnocentMissLittleInnocentMissLittlealmost 9 years ago

Love love love it, can't wait for the next chapter <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Chapter 3???????

And 4? And 5? And 6? And? And? And?

From the great words of Bob Wiley, "GIMME GIMME GIMME, I NEED I NEED I NEED, GIMME GIMME GIMME!"

ufluxufluxalmost 9 years ago
Loving it!

Great series!! Great writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please update!!!!

The perfect taboo story. Love it! Was it father damian's first time too? Nope? Is this a hobby if him corrupting young ladies? No no

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Chapter 3 Please

Great steamy story. Have been waiting faithfully for chapter three.

ramonbrookramonbrookover 8 years ago
WOW ... Anxiously waiting for chapter 3!

Very good story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
MORE PLEASE!!!

I have been looking for a priest/young girl story for soooo long and this one is perfect! I'm absolutely in love with your writing style and i love how there's more to the story than the (amazing) naughty scenes -which I want more of! Damien is so fucking hot, can't wait for you to post the rest

Katatude4LifeKatatude4Lifeover 8 years ago
MORE

God, I want more!!! Please continue!

BigDickedNerdBigDickedNerdalmost 8 years ago
wonderful writing

You are a wonderful story teller, I am quite impressed (and turned on). I hope to hear from you again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
dying

I literally gasped at Tara being awake. Please God give us Chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Illicit passion ... the best ...

Love the erotic buildup in Ch.1 & the illicit nature of the passion

BiotechGirlBiotechGirlalmost 8 years ago
I'm dying along with anonymous!

I'm dying along with anonymous! Tara was awake! Tara was the one who initially remarked on how attractive the priest was and she was hurt by Emily's reply. Then Tara liked Kyle and was hurt when he was interested in Emily instead and Emily flirted back even though she wasn't interested. Twice-hurt Tara might not be too willing to keep Emily's secret. Trouble is a brewing. I hope we get to see a conclusion to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Oh my gosh

I don't like Tara, so please get her together with the little dick guy. Maybe she knows something is up, maybe she doesn't. But please don't let her get in between them, I love how they are now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing

Pleaaaase continue with this story! This was stellar. I love the writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Holy Shit

This is absolutely incredible. I love the build up throughout chapter 1 and 2. One of the stories I keep coming back to. Please write chapter 3!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More

Where is the next chapter????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
oh my god that was amazing!!!

next chapter?? i'm so excited!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So freaking hot

Chapter 3, please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Please finish this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Phenomenal

Idk how I’m just finding this story, but it is literally the best I’ve ever read on this site. That’s definitely saying something, bc I’ve read a ton! It’s been 4 years, but we still need a chapter 3!!!

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