by LillyRae
Such a good story!! I couldn't wait for chapter 2 and I'm looking forward to chapter 3! Keep writing!!
Love this story it is so hot and arousing I have to go change my undies. Your attention to detail is on point. Love to see where they go next and to see what Tara is up to..... Keep up the great writing...
Quite a few women have fantasy of seducing priest. Many like to tease with "accidental" flashing and rubbing. Some do succeed
I think you're a talented writer and this is a good story, but part two is missing some of the tension and reservation of the first part. Where's the Catholic guilt as a background that makes this kind of plot so deliciously hot? I would recommend more conflictedness for your characters.
Very well written.
Blasphemous perhaps and interestingly so.
Looking forward to the next chapter. It's been all 5 star so far.
Can't believe I almost missed this. Good thing I was having trouble falling asleep.
The heat in this chapter just about fried my circuit board! Very hot and well done.
My only criticism is the young girl in this story goes from shy, guilt ridden virgin to 'able to deepthroat, ride-me-wild', screaming orgasmic, questioning my faith woman pretty darn fast.
If I rate this chapter as a stand alone, I'd go with a 5. If I rate it as Ch 2, I'd go a 3. I like your writing, just slow the emotional pace down a smidge.
I've just read both your chapters and have to say they've really done it for me <3 That said, the second one might have been a lot more teasing still, and not so jumping on to it. She felt a bit too comfortable for a virgin but tbh it was still super hot :) Keep writing!
And 4? And 5? And 6? And? And? And?
From the great words of Bob Wiley, "GIMME GIMME GIMME, I NEED I NEED I NEED, GIMME GIMME GIMME!"
The perfect taboo story. Love it! Was it father damian's first time too? Nope? Is this a hobby if him corrupting young ladies? No no
Great steamy story. Have been waiting faithfully for chapter three.
I have been looking for a priest/young girl story for soooo long and this one is perfect! I'm absolutely in love with your writing style and i love how there's more to the story than the (amazing) naughty scenes -which I want more of! Damien is so fucking hot, can't wait for you to post the rest
You are a wonderful story teller, I am quite impressed (and turned on). I hope to hear from you again.
I literally gasped at Tara being awake. Please God give us Chapter 3
Love the erotic buildup in Ch.1 & the illicit nature of the passion
I'm dying along with anonymous! Tara was awake! Tara was the one who initially remarked on how attractive the priest was and she was hurt by Emily's reply. Then Tara liked Kyle and was hurt when he was interested in Emily instead and Emily flirted back even though she wasn't interested. Twice-hurt Tara might not be too willing to keep Emily's secret. Trouble is a brewing. I hope we get to see a conclusion to this story.
I don't like Tara, so please get her together with the little dick guy. Maybe she knows something is up, maybe she doesn't. But please don't let her get in between them, I love how they are now.
Pleaaaase continue with this story! This was stellar. I love the writing style.
This is absolutely incredible. I love the build up throughout chapter 1 and 2. One of the stories I keep coming back to. Please write chapter 3!!
Idk how I’m just finding this story, but it is literally the best I’ve ever read on this site. That’s definitely saying something, bc I’ve read a ton! It’s been 4 years, but we still need a chapter 3!!!