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Lynn's Story

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by Anonymous

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by Jetcrash74703/14/15

If only

Dreams could turn into reality. Great story, way too short but well written.

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by impo_6003/14/15

Good story...3*

Dreams can come true if the husband and wife understand each other completely, and their love for each other make them be only one...

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by Anonymous03/14/15

Was

Was Lynn his wife?

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by seekeraz03/14/15

Thank you. Another truly loving wife story

It held may attention all the way through. You may have telegraphed the end a little early in the story but I looked forward to the conclusion all the more.

This is one of the reasons I return to LW. Thanks for keeping me coming back

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by Anonymous03/14/15

Nice flash story of a dreamy wife and the promise of a steamy night.

Short, sweet, and to the point. Just like my you know what. How many stars is that worth?

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by tazz31703/14/15

DREAMS CAN COME TRUE

as long as waking up isn't a nightmare. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by TexasBB03/15/15

Good First Story

Very good short story. Well written and engaging. Looking forward to your future submissions

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by Anonymous03/15/15

yep

Happens on all my trips.

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by Lickideesplit03/15/15

Dreams = Fantasy < LW

Dreams which cannot be differentiated from reality are unfulfilling! All events are possible and plausible; therefore inconsequential. I HATE movies where, at the end, they say ... "and then, I woke up!"

It does not bother me when dreams happen, but are clearly differentiated from the realities ... not so in this offering!

2*

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by Anonymous03/15/15

stupid

no real commitment in this one

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