All Comments on 'Room Service'

Good start - hope there's more to follow!

If the spelling choice in the description of your story is an indication, I'll pass.

It's not an indication friend, and you don't know what you are missing :)

please continue the story.

Sigh..... If only

Xxxx

Emily

or public display of affections?

Perhaps next time, instead of a fine, community service would more appropriate.

(I just couldn't resist poking fun at the error)

btw, I loved the story, there are so many possibilities awaiting them. and not for just the remainder of the two week scheduled stay. *****