Good start - hope there's more to follow!
If the spelling choice in the description of your story is an indication, I'll pass.
It's not an indication friend, and you don't know what you are missing :)
please continue the story.
Sigh..... If only Xxxx Emily
or public display of affections? Perhaps next time, instead of a fine, community service would more appropriate. (I just couldn't resist poking fun at the error) btw, I loved the story, there are so many possibilities awaiting them. and not for just the remainder of the two week scheduled stay. *****
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Good start - hope there's more to follow!
"A maid fined a pair of sexy panties hanging on a door."??
If the spelling choice in the description of your story is an indication, I'll pass.
It's not an indication friend, and you don't know what you are missing :)
more
please continue the story.
Thrilling
Sigh..... If only
Xxxx
Emily
Was it for littering?
or public display of affections?
Perhaps next time, instead of a fine, community service would more appropriate.
(I just couldn't resist poking fun at the error)
btw, I loved the story, there are so many possibilities awaiting them. and not for just the remainder of the two week scheduled stay. *****
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