All Comments on 'Please, Don't Make Me Do It'

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knightfalzknightfalzover 19 years ago
Another excellent story.

Once again top-notch. The descriptions of the submission scenes were great. The main character is really developed, having quite complex thoughts and motivations. She submits, but is never truly dominated in the end. Anyway, i quite enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
NO, NO don't do it,- I Love It!

A well developed, true to life "Submissive Woman" exercises control over a man - and then another - who thought he was in charge. Englander, a true novelist, does a wonderful job developing characters and bringing them into reality for the reader. GP

BlueEyed5ftAngelBlueEyed5ftAngelover 19 years ago
Very nice little plot!

Okay, You surprised me with Peter! Great twist! What an imagination young lady! Bravo!

ishtatishtatover 19 years ago
Conversational

Fine story. I'm reading through all of yours at the moment.I love the way that your main character at vital points, seems to be having a conversation with me, the reader.I actually caught myself nodding agreement a couple of times.Very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Brilliantly written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Murder Was NOT the Answer!

30 years of marriage doesn't deserve confrontation,explanation, and some communication?!

Some loving wife she turned out to be! I hope she and her priest burn in hell for eternity!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Different, well written but very different?

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