One Trick Penny Ch. 08

Good story.

I like how even though she's skirting the edge, she has ZERO desire to go over it. I like that she's doing this for them but only for them.

Can't believe there's only 4 chapters left.

Continues to be entertaining.

Embarassing stupid characters.

What is there to care about or to find entertaining? This is the two Stooges, without the wit or humor. Glad your huge fan base is lapping it up. It how they drink water too.

Building up beautifully.

So far, each chapter has been better than the one before. Too bad, though, that this story is projected to be only twelve chapters. Considering that each chapter thus far has been so short, I could see this story going beyond the announced twelve.

Well, keeping her on the fringe of things has it's share of.....

.....excitement. I wonder how soon she'll cross over into something she can't walk away from.....these scenarios are so prone to suck her in, it can't go on forever with her easily walking away at just the right moment to avoid anything that would hurt or anger hubby, or compromise her ever sketchier morals.....
Well, let's see if you write human nature or fairy tales.
Not too many technical issues, but please put more effort into your editing. Several bumps this time with scenes, dialog and grammar/spelling.