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This has to run to at least 24 chapters!
Building up nicely again. Apart from the humiliation session in an early chapter I have really enjoyed this series. Please keep it up, and stretch it to 24 chapters or more! 5 for effort, and 4 for content.
Vapid debate about marriage versus prostitution. Feminist drivel
The woman: "I was just diagnosed with cancer and can't have sex anymore; I'm sorry."
Response from customer to a prostitute: That's too bad. Can you refer me to a equal or better replacement fuck?
Response from a (real) husband to wife (while holding her): "My dear precious partner. Sex should be all about love, but love is not all about sex. We will do together what we have always done, make the best of what we have, together. And as long as I have you, I have the best there is. Don't be sorry, please, just be my wife, for as long as we both shall live."
I pity those who think marriage is a form a prostitution. I will admit I don't know what its like to use a prostitute, but I know what its like to be in a real marriage. The passion and commitment indicated above is just the tip of the iceberg. Priceless!
Great story. Interesting debate on the difference between prostitution and marriage.
If my wife stopped having sex with me, I would still love her and remain married to her (not saying I would be happy about it) but a prostitute is replaceable.
I finally have to agree with an Anonymous...
AT LEAST 24 chapters, since they run so short. And I have chronic back pain and have only briefly thought of using my TENS unit for stimulation. Since the intensity is variable, it might be interesting to experiment with.
Love, sex, and money.
Agree with the commenters about the argument of "marriage vs. prostitution". I've heard that argument many times from many different people; all of whom have been burned by love in some form or another. Whether it be an absentee parent or merely getting fucked over time and time again by the opposite (or same) sex the argument is based on the premise that sex is an exchangeable item, or a weapon to be yielded to gain something of value. People who buy into this idea understand the basics of sex and its merits, but can't grasp the true essence of it.
That is a "poetic" way of introducing this point. Sex is probably the most valuable thing on this earth to humans. It is the only thing that can "add" something to this earth that wasn't already here, namely another human. It is also the single most pleasurable thing a person can do. This is why it is valuable. What this argument does is it takes away the true value of sex and tries to put a dollar sign on it instead. To these people, the true value of sex is obscure. No matter what dollar they put on it, in the end they feel cheap and used. That is because they could never get in return what sex is really worth. No matter the amount, it is never enough.
As for the story, I like it although it is getting a little monotonous. It is about a truly loving couple which is rare for this genre. The only problem is that people (namely me) come to this genre to read about heartbreak, redemption, cuckolding, revenge, swinging, or just simply a cheating spouse. This story is quite good and entertaining, but it isn't what I come to this section for. It is like eating a really good steak when you had your heart set on seafood. I can deal with that replacement on occasion, but eventually I will tire of the steak and look for the seafood that I crave. I will still give it a 5 because it is a really good story.
She's a whore
What is interesting about it? That her husband is a moron and she's a slut? Not a single decent character in this mess. Sure as heck isn't fun or entertaining to read.
Still enjoying it
I like the short chapters, keeping (up) my interest and I look every day for a new chapter. It will be a shame when its over.
not erotic, no love, no wife.
Just a slut and a sad pathic man she used to be married to, this writer hates himself and women.
This seems to be drifting off into a devolving direction.....
....I keep hoping something interesting will happen, but it seems more of a "how low can you go" story at this point, than any real story of people I might find interesting, exploring things
I might want to.
In short, it's getting boring.
just a correction.
They hang ten when surfing not hang eleven.
Some different between true marriage and prostitution.
True faithful marriage saves both partners from STDs (The hepatitis is STD too!!!!)
True faithful marriage saves the children from a lot of danger!
Does the prostitution save the kids?????
True faithful marriage decreases the likelihood of violent criminal events to prostitution.
True faithful marriage decreases drug abusing possibility rate.
etc........
Quick healing up=fantasy story=as no STDs world
To be willing cuck is illness so a fantasy story (where the STDs are not) can show the willing cuck heals up from Cuck fetish mental illness and he looks for a divorce lawyer. A fantasy story which shows lack of STDs danger the author can show quich healing up from cuckolding with divorce..............
You dear annony are a dumb fucking ass wipe. These stroies are fiction
like werewolf, or James Bond. Get a grip for God sakes. Stop reading these and crawl out from under your rock!! I gave it a 5 because it pissed your sorry ass off
Fantasy story to heal up from illness quickly
@Bonnysneichder The willing cuckolding is mental illness so why is problem in a fantasy story the husband heals up from this illness quickly with a divorce? A new twist in the boring plots is a quick healing up from mental illness. In fantasy story the quick healing up is a good new direction.
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