The story is very intense in its base desires and feelings of both characters. Personally, I prefer to have more character development, however, you have done a good job in getting to the core of the characters.
I really appreciate the feedback. I definitely agree about more character development being better, and it's something I'm definitely working to improve on. Again, thank you!
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Intense
The story is very intense in its base desires and feelings of both characters. Personally, I prefer to have more character development, however, you have done a good job in getting to the core of the characters.
Thank you!
I really appreciate the feedback. I definitely agree about more character development being better, and it's something I'm definitely working to improve on. Again, thank you!
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