I enjoyed your story. Even with the fiction disclaimer, I found it very realistic and erotic. The only thing that seemed forced was watching the couple the next day. More realistic might have been for Paul to realize he was alone again, but still feeling the connection of the touching experience from the previous day.
I look forward to future chapters.
Very sensual, very erotic, very hot! But: Even Mr. Mojorisin would'nt have to carry a note, if I were a 34E type. But that's our only critisism. Thank you for posting.
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I enjoyed your story. Even with the fiction disclaimer, I found it very realistic and erotic. The only thing that seemed forced was watching the couple the next day. More realistic might have been for Paul to realize he was alone again, but still feeling the connection of the touching experience from the previous day.
I look forward to future chapters.
What a story!
Very sensual, very erotic, very hot! But: Even Mr. Mojorisin would'nt have to carry a note, if I were a 34E type. But that's our only critisism. Thank you for posting.
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