All Comments on 'Eve's Introduction to BDSM Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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who beat a person is not my idea of d/s, it's abuse.

genevieve_genevieve_about 9 years agoAuthor

You make a good point

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Even though Eve and her friend have talked about it, going is far different. This is all moving very quickly for a newbie. Your descriptions are very good. More of what she is thinking as things happen would be good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Bolero

If Eve had ear plugs in, then it would almost be impossible to hear the music at first. It runs about 15 minutes starting very slowly and very quietly. It repeats over and over again rising in tempo and decibel. Unless started over halfway thru the recording Eve could not have heard it as it could not have "flooded through the earplugs". Just a slight technical misrepresentation. The story is other wise enjoyable.

genevieve_genevieve_about 9 years agoAuthor

Ear plugs, ear buds, ear phones to me they are all the same

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