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What a piece of shit
This series should not have even been written. A complete waste of time.
Great story
Well writen, good story, Bravo !
Don't let people get you down
I like the story and think it could be great if you were to add more detail in what dawn is thinking and feeling, really get us inside her head. That is what sucks someone into a fantasy is detail. Don't let all the trolls stop you from doing something you want to do. Cheers and good luck.
The suspense is building
Excellent story, skillful use of building suspense. I look forward to the rest of it.
Fabulous
I am glad that you have kept going, and have not being put off by negative comments. Look forward to chapter five Rosy lips !
Hot
Keep up the good work
kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com
Enjoying this story
I'm looking forward to see what happens to Dawn and her friends. I hope chapter five will be forthcoming soon!
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