Gratitude Times Three

Typical cluck author.

No talent and nothing original. Usual tripe.

Seriously..."Come on Jack, fuck me dude!"

What a crappy sick unbelievable story

If you like this shit , something is wrong with you. Let's see, never gave her boss any indication of having sex with him. So she gets a promotion based on her work and ablitilty. So she invites her boss over for dinner so her husband and the boss are going to have her for dinner. Now this perverted writer needs to get a life . This could never happen. I can see an affair but this is pure bullshit.

Been here, done this.....

.....1,800 times. Got anything original?
Try not using stupid slang that adults don't use in highly excited situations. It sounds silly on the ear.
Try reducing the number of exclamation points to less than 1/8 of all the sentences. Otherwise you come off as overly dramatic.
That would go a long way toward NOT sounding like a used car or wonder cleaner commercial.

HEY ANNONY you dirt bag fuck!!

You got anything original? Na, didn't think so, you and your bastard son harry just bitch and cry like the fags you are

dear bonnietaylor2:

We are all entitled to our own option, (at least until the tea bagers ban that).
This has theme has been redone a thousand times or more. The story read and felt like a paint by numbers, a Chinese menu (some of item A some of item B).

If we can't comment on how we react to the story then whats the point of comments? If the comments are for nothing but stroking the egos of the writers then turn off the comments and write a script that flash "Great Story" every 5 seconds on the submitter's screen.

@deadone

It is not only the far right that want to kill free speech, the far left want only those who agree with them to be allowed.
It was not the Right that created Political Correctness, which is nothing but censoring those who disagree with the Left.

Stories about the wife's boss...

Stories about the wife's boss are very usual, but at least in this one there are respect and all done in due agreement. What I don't agree is with the boss (this or anyone that fucks one or more of their personel...), because a boss that does this will loose the power that a boss must have over his employees. A boss that does this is in the hands of those employees for any kind of blackmail...However 3*

The only dirt bag on this site is bonnietaylor2

Her scoring is meaningless and worthless. At least the anons give a story what it deserves. This bitch gives scores to get back at anonymous comments. Anything this cunt scores gets an automatic 1 star from me. Stick your meaningless score where the sun don't shine, and that's being generous.

1*

Throw this piece of dung in the trash can where it belongs.

this is consensual by husband and wife with no demeaning, a good one

finally a story of a wife in a threesome I can understand and accept

Gotta Understand..

BonnieTaylor2 is a whore with several STDs and who was kicked out by her husband and was ordered by the courts to stay 1000 feet away from her children. You can meet her at McDonalds using their free WiFi since she lives in a cardboard box onthe streets.

Thank you

Being new to this site I am surprised at the comments/discussion caused by this particular story. Either the Anonymous individuals really didn't care for it, or they simply enjoy giving less than constructive comments for those trying to provide some reading done by novice writers.
But I appreciate all those who did take the time to read it.
As Chuck Yeager wrote, "1. Never sweat the small stuff. 2.Unless it's life threatening, everything is small stuff."