All Comments on 'Seduction in an Elevator'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Part 2?

Will there be a part 2 so we see how it finishes?

chennai_rakshasanchennai_rakshasanabout 9 years ago
Short & Sweet!

Crisply written although I wished could be longer. Interesting nevertheless.:-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Ray surprises them

Great story. Write the next chapter. Would be great if Ray surprised jenny and Kim, the virgin learns quickly. They could go straight from cock sucking to anal.

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