Enjoyed the story. Great build up and a nice twist to finish it.
You had me w/ some great dialogue, authentic AND funny:"And there is third option, where Jasmine doesn't get laid and neither do you. In fact, that is the most likely alternative, don't you think?" Very clever.
I just wonder whether or not they are wearing their habits or not? Cause if they are...the waitress would have gossip enough for a month of Sundays!
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Nice twist
Enjoyed the story. Great build up and a nice twist to finish it.
Imaginative
You had me w/ some great dialogue, authentic AND funny:"And there is third option, where Jasmine doesn't get laid and neither do you. In fact, that is the most likely alternative, don't you think?"
Very clever.
very Song of Solomon
I just wonder whether or not they are wearing their habits or not?
Cause if they are...the waitress would have gossip enough for a month of Sundays!
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