The shopping trip was great...It is very realistic when you described the feelings. The planning and dressing...then the disappointment in the department store when she had no audience, followed by the thrill at the meat counter and with the older man helping her load the truck.
I can recall exactly those feelings. What a good story.
It's inevitable. Matching dildos to imagined cock size? This Gwen, whoever the hell she is, might as well get it over with. Natalie hasn't improved with age either. In fact there are no more sympathetic characters, just pathetic ones and pathetic readers.As they continue to devolve through the bonobo stage on to having to return their opposable thumbs the story becomes sadder and sadder.
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Anonymous03/18/15
even for
a fantasy an emptier world than this is not possible
Another great chapter in this on going story. I like that everything progresses at a nice pace so the story still seems believable. Thanks for all your hard work on it. I 'll be waiting for the next chapter.
A new episode of this story is my Literotica highlight of the month. Many many thanks.
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Anonymous03/19/15
Very well done!
I love it when she gets the urge to expose herself.
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Anonymous03/19/15
Awesome!
The shopping trip was awesome! The things I would do to run into Gwen at the grocery store ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Anonymous03/22/15
Thanks for the great stories
I have really enjoyed reading these today. Found them this morning, and spent most of the afternoon reading all these wonderful stories. I am glad I took this long to discover them, as I got all 30+ stories in a row. You are a wonderful storyteller, and really know how to keep the story interesting. Thanks, please keep going!
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Anonymous04/04/15
Suggestion
Cant wait to read the next chapter. Maybe the next time Gwen and Tim have sex he can tell her he wants her to be louder and she finally breaks the habit od holding in her noise when she finishes?? Just a suggestion of something ide like to see with this story
Of those who criticize, most are Anonymous. But of those who have a registered name, look at their profile: the majority of the time, there are no contributions. As I've noted before, that's akin to one purporting to be a food critic, yet having any no ability in the kitchen. The comments somewhat ring hollow.
Unless you have made the effort to put thoughts on paper, successfully or not, do not deride those who attempt this difficult craft.
I have voted 5 for each contribution. Well deserved.
English
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The shopping trip was great...It is very realistic when you described the feelings. The planning and dressing...then the disappointment in the department store when she had no audience, followed by the thrill at the meat counter and with the older man helping her load the truck.
I can recall exactly those feelings. What a good story.
Love AG
I revisited for the first time and...
It's inevitable. Matching dildos to imagined cock size? This Gwen, whoever the hell she is, might as well get it over with. Natalie hasn't improved with age either. In fact there are no more sympathetic characters, just pathetic ones and pathetic readers.As they continue to devolve through the bonobo stage on to having to return their opposable thumbs the story becomes sadder and sadder.
even for
a fantasy an emptier world than this is not possible
Great
Another great chapter in this on going story. I like that everything progresses at a nice pace so the story still seems believable. Thanks for all your hard work on it. I 'll be waiting for the next chapter.
utterly captivating
A new episode of this story is my Literotica highlight of the month. Many many thanks.
Very well done!
I love it when she gets the urge to expose herself.
Awesome!
The shopping trip was awesome! The things I would do to run into Gwen at the grocery store ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for the great stories
I have really enjoyed reading these today. Found them this morning, and spent most of the afternoon reading all these wonderful stories. I am glad I took this long to discover them, as I got all 30+ stories in a row. You are a wonderful storyteller, and really know how to keep the story interesting. Thanks, please keep going!
Suggestion
Cant wait to read the next chapter. Maybe the next time Gwen and Tim have sex he can tell her he wants her to be louder and she finally breaks the habit od holding in her noise when she finishes?? Just a suggestion of something ide like to see with this story
I've seen this many times.
Of those who criticize, most are Anonymous. But of those who have a registered name, look at their profile: the majority of the time, there are no contributions. As I've noted before, that's akin to one purporting to be a food critic, yet having any no ability in the kitchen. The comments somewhat ring hollow.
Unless you have made the effort to put thoughts on paper, successfully or not, do not deride those who attempt this difficult craft.
I have voted 5 for each contribution. Well deserved.
Thanks.
Most Excellent
*****
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