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Taking On the Baseball Team

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/19/15

Just a couple of comments

1. Don't rush the story - too fast and it's just a mess
2. Please get an editor - just a few fixes would go a long way to a better story

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by camperguy12303/19/15

Loved your story

Loved the story very much but after the baseball teams first go you ended the story very quickly. I can see many more chapters here.

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