I'm so frustrated: your story describes my favorite porn fantasy and rang all my chimes. But you rushed through two key elements and made none of it believable.
First, there's no lead-in to the wife's switch from frustrated but loving wife to screaming shrew. Second, there's no hint that the husband will fall to his knees and suck a cock.
With a few sentences added in the right places to set the reader up for these sudden changes, the story would have flowed better.
I confess, this is one of my fav fantasies - to be dominated by a woman and made to suck cock and lick her creampie. I would have preferred the wife to be a little bit more caring and not as cruel , like if she would have said upon being discovered "I'm sorry baby , but its been so long since I've had a big cock to really satisfy me.", and just in general being dominate without being mean. But still , like I said , this is one of my fav fantasies and this story did make me cum hard.
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Anonymous03/22/15
Good story
I don't care for the forced/humiliation that others obviously do, but each to their own. In my own case, after some discussion, my wife and I invited my buddy into our bed for a threesome just to try it out. It turned out to be fascinating. To watch him slide his cock into her pussy was amazing, it just sunk in with no resistance. And then when he just ran it in and out, I thought I'd cum just watching. But the neatest part? When he sped up, started to grunt, then his ass clenched hard, it was incredible. He was cumming in MY wife! He continued to ride her, slower and slower, milking his orgasm out and I could see sperm running down her ass. He finally drew out and rolled to the side and my wife closed her legs. I was on fire from what I saw.
Surprising us all, I leaned forward and took his cock into my mouth. He was sensitive, but I cleaned gently, finally he was able to let me take it to the base and my tongue was alive around his cock head. Then I moved to my wife and as her legs opened I could see the cum about to escape her hole and fastened my mouth around it. Swirling my tongue inside it broke the dam and his sperm began to pour out! I didn't miss a drop and cleaned her out over the next ten minutes or so!
When I sat up, my cock was hard as a rock. I was horny beyond believe and saw my buddy was beginning to get another hard-on! Not even thinking, I took it in my hand, not bothering to even ask and put my mouth around the head. Jacking the shaft gently, I sucked, using my tongue on the bottom of his head, there was no doubt what I was working toward! My other hand was on my own cock and I didn't noticed my wife watching intently, strumming her clit with her finger. My buddy was holding onto the sheets while I sucked and when I heard him grunt, I knew he was close.
When he burst in my mouth, the heat of his semen was incredible across my tongue. I continue to jack him through it, making him continue and not stopping until he began to soften. When he shot the first burst into my mouth, my own cock exploded! Sperm was being shot everywhere and my wife was grunting through her own orgasm while she watched.
We all learned something. One, my wife loved watching. Two, my friend absolutely LOVED me sucking his cock! And three, I loved sucking cock, at least, his cock. His semen tasted good enough I didn't even have to consider whether to swallow it or not and I loved the large volume he produced. There is nothing like making someone cum with your hand and mouth. Nothing.
The three of us is a regular part of our love life. Our friend stops by to fuck my wife, sometimes just for a blowjob from me. Occasionally I'll call him to come over and let me suck his cock and I jack off while I do it.. Absolutely amazing!
Please keep trying
I'm so frustrated: your story describes my favorite porn fantasy and rang all my chimes. But you rushed through two key elements and made none of it believable.
First, there's no lead-in to the wife's switch from frustrated but loving wife to screaming shrew. Second, there's no hint that the husband will fall to his knees and suck a cock.
With a few sentences added in the right places to set the reader up for these sudden changes, the story would have flowed better.
I confess, this is one of my fav fantasies - to be dominated by a woman and made to suck cock and lick her creampie. I would have preferred the wife to be a little bit more caring and not as cruel , like if she would have said upon being discovered "I'm sorry baby , but its been so long since I've had a big cock to really satisfy me.", and just in general being dominate without being mean. But still , like I said , this is one of my fav fantasies and this story did make me cum hard.
Good story
I don't care for the forced/humiliation that others obviously do, but each to their own. In my own case, after some discussion, my wife and I invited my buddy into our bed for a threesome just to try it out. It turned out to be fascinating. To watch him slide his cock into her pussy was amazing, it just sunk in with no resistance. And then when he just ran it in and out, I thought I'd cum just watching. But the neatest part? When he sped up, started to grunt, then his ass clenched hard, it was incredible. He was cumming in MY wife! He continued to ride her, slower and slower, milking his orgasm out and I could see sperm running down her ass. He finally drew out and rolled to the side and my wife closed her legs. I was on fire from what I saw.
Surprising us all, I leaned forward and took his cock into my mouth. He was sensitive, but I cleaned gently, finally he was able to let me take it to the base and my tongue was alive around his cock head. Then I moved to my wife and as her legs opened I could see the cum about to escape her hole and fastened my mouth around it. Swirling my tongue inside it broke the dam and his sperm began to pour out! I didn't miss a drop and cleaned her out over the next ten minutes or so!
When I sat up, my cock was hard as a rock. I was horny beyond believe and saw my buddy was beginning to get another hard-on! Not even thinking, I took it in my hand, not bothering to even ask and put my mouth around the head. Jacking the shaft gently, I sucked, using my tongue on the bottom of his head, there was no doubt what I was working toward! My other hand was on my own cock and I didn't noticed my wife watching intently, strumming her clit with her finger. My buddy was holding onto the sheets while I sucked and when I heard him grunt, I knew he was close.
When he burst in my mouth, the heat of his semen was incredible across my tongue. I continue to jack him through it, making him continue and not stopping until he began to soften. When he shot the first burst into my mouth, my own cock exploded! Sperm was being shot everywhere and my wife was grunting through her own orgasm while she watched.
We all learned something. One, my wife loved watching. Two, my friend absolutely LOVED me sucking his cock! And three, I loved sucking cock, at least, his cock. His semen tasted good enough I didn't even have to consider whether to swallow it or not and I loved the large volume he produced. There is nothing like making someone cum with your hand and mouth. Nothing.
The three of us is a regular part of our love life. Our friend stops by to fuck my wife, sometimes just for a blowjob from me. Occasionally I'll call him to come over and let me suck his cock and I jack off while I do it.. Absolutely amazing!
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