by AlexSegue
Thanks for the effort.
Really a good and funny story...Reading it make us laugh and well-disposed...4*
If his dream had been anything but prophetic, I would have expected his reaction at opening the door to the five girls to be more surprise and recoil.....or are you suggesting that wifey somehow came to know about the content of his dream/memory?
Better to have made something like that just a wee bit more explicit.
As I said....
Meh.