Escalation Ch. 01

I hope she leaves the douche bag

I agree with @gdjohn52...

I agree with @gdjohn52...But she should have left him as soon as he sugested that to her...But now it will be too late...And the story is going the way about "black men superiority"!!!! Even if these kind of stories are written by black men, don't they see that instead of making them superior, that makes them look inferior? For me all men are equals, no matter race, but to want to be superior in the "fuck" department, it's like saying: "I'm comparing myself to an animal, like a bull, a donkey...". And so they are demean themselves, instead of level with all kind of men and all kind of humans...That's why these kind of stories are a fuse to racism, to hate, and people mustn't be surprised that after all the years racism is still growing in the world...1*

If he ain't there, it ain't swinging.

It's just stupidity. See should have gone to the divorce lawyer. The rest was complete drivel.

Stupidity

Anon to your mention of the Swedish site, there is just as many others sites for other fetishes, whether its black chicks for white dicks, or Asian chicks for white or black dicks, or foot fetishes or bondage fetishes or whether people are into hair colour, types of clothing, anime, whatever and it is porn simply, and they get paid to do it, and to many people it is simply a fetish.. and to many others if it is what they are into then no one else and nothing else can turn them on as the fetish they are into.. I know a girl who dumped her well endowed boyfriend because after having a baby she didn't want something so big being pushed repeatedly in and out of her she is with a guy who is only average sized and is much happier with her sex life.. I know married people can genuinely love their spouse but will cheat because their spouse refuses certain sex acts, whether it is dominance or submission or footworship etc etc so they get it elsewhere...

Racist comments

The racial rants that readers sent are ugly and disgusting. Stories like this seem to bring out the pinheads.

The idea that the change room would be suddenly coed is a lawsuit waiting to happen.

And I question a persons marriage who can claim to fuck as many people as they want and have a rock solid relationship. If one person is giving themselves away, how long before there is nothing left to share with the spouse? How long before the spouse is feeling neglected or marginalized and the fallout from that?

Cliche on Cliche

No other words to describe it.

not sure whether

the worst part is the story or the comments

Trite, jerky-jerky in spots and fully qualifies yet another unimaginative....

....repeat of one of the four way over used cuck-boy stories.

In a word....boring.

Oh, and sad. Why? Because unlike too many here, you write quite well, apparently taking reasonable time to edit and correct your writing. Not perfect, but nothing worth fussing over.