I love how this story started now it's time to get to the solution to this complex relationship. Who is going to tell the wife and mother ? How do they find out? I just can't wait to see how it unfolds.
I too can't wait for more. However I am having trouble reconciling the love he has with his sister and the love and commitment necessary to marry Adrienne. I'd like to see how you handle it in later chapters. Keep going.
He loves his sister and wife? wtf, he really aint being truthful to both the women, no matter how much he loves his sister. Such a loser, he was fucking sister and had time and heart to love another woman enough to marry her, have a kid and spoil her life. This is why Incest is a crime. Females are weak at heart and are usually at the receiving end. BTW nicely written, gave 5 stars.
This is a wonderful depiction of emotional conflict and submission to desire. I think I might know how it will turn out, but then I'm possibly wrong, so I won't say. but now on to Ch.2.
Have been a fan for long time and this is some of your best .Great to see your writing again . Was reading you when you we just ( _ ) and you still one of the best on here ..
incest is a crime? Because of who? Because the brainwashing of so-called 'norms' that slaves in today's society pass around? Because terror-crats (so-called authorities and governments say so?). Wake up and see reality.
A tidal wave of emotions. Reminds me of the feelings I get whenever I am forced into proximity with my ex-fiance. You do a masterful job here as with all your work. Keep it up!
English
A GOOD START AS USUAL
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS STORY GOES.
Good start
I love how this story started now it's time to get to the solution to this complex relationship. Who is going to tell the wife and mother ? How do they find out? I just can't wait to see how it unfolds.
loving it, but.....
I too can't wait for more. However I am having trouble reconciling the love he has with his sister and the love and commitment necessary to marry Adrienne. I'd like to see how you handle it in later chapters. Keep going.
Bullshit
He loves his sister and wife? wtf, he really aint being truthful to both the women, no matter how much he loves his sister. Such a loser, he was fucking sister and had time and heart to love another woman enough to marry her, have a kid and spoil her life. This is why Incest is a crime. Females are weak at heart and are usually at the receiving end. BTW nicely written, gave 5 stars.
Re: Bullshit
Lol thnx
Conflict
This is a wonderful depiction of emotional conflict and submission to desire. I think I might know how it will turn out, but then I'm possibly wrong, so I won't say. but now on to Ch.2.
katy
finish story
Good as always.
Have been a fan for long time and this is some of your best .Great to see your writing again . Was reading you when you we just ( _ ) and you still one of the best on here ..
@bullshit
incest is a crime? Because of who? Because the brainwashing of so-called 'norms' that slaves in today's society pass around? Because terror-crats (so-called authorities and governments say so?). Wake up and see reality.
Anguish
A tidal wave of emotions. Reminds me of the feelings I get whenever I am forced into proximity with my ex-fiance. You do a masterful job here as with all your work. Keep it up!
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