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"Hey man, whatcha doin"

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/20/15

Hot Cum Sizzling Yummy Hot

How I yearn for such a big thick hot cock to suck on, to feel the warm juices exploding from his thick cock into my mouth and ass fill's me with so much orgasmic pleasure that I am licking my own cum from my hand as I type this comment YUM YUM YUM

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by Anonymous03/20/15

Complete garbage!

If there is an award for the most poorly written story on Literotica, this story is a sure winner!

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by Anonymous03/22/15

Great job!

Honestly can't believe someone would think this was poorly written. Totally hot with vivid descriptions. A sequel with fucking would be great.

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by TallyMans03/22/15

Thanks for the good comments, as well as, the criticism.

Appreciate the comments, all taken under advisement. Maybe the next one will be better received.

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