It Had To Be Magic Ch. 03

Nice end for the storyline. But...

Where's the harm in adding a fourth chapter to a three-part story? Your readers would love to see what happens when Amanda joins the siblings.

Looking forward to your next story, whatever it is.

Loved it

I personally loved the kinkiness of some moderate bdsm, some nice D/s and a nice variety of other nastiness like cum drinking and anal sex. Your premise of using a magic act to seduce his sister was unique and inspired. I loved how you filled in the back story of Amanda and their adventures together. I gave it 5 stars and look forward to future work from you.

loved it

please don't make us wait so long for your next story

thank you

Caught my attention

I normally avoid stories that involve forcing of a participant or apparent cruelty. This one indeed showed me that not all stories that involved force are necessarily cruel. By being forceful, he was allowing her to be the person that she wanted, even needed to be. By showing him take the time and make the effort to understand what she wanted/needed, it shows that he loves her and is willing to do as she needs even as much as he wants his own needs fulfilled.

Clearly, more chapters are necessary

While he has one girl that he fantasized about, he now has an accomplice to get another. The magic show is still upcoming, so how is the story over?

Great story

Love this story, you need to write the further adventures of these siblings as he adds her friend Amanda to his harem of lovers.

Great Story!!!!!

I hope you continue this series, you really get pulled into your stories. Thanks for your time and effort.

Dirty Sister, Naughty Brother

An older sister that's teasing her little brother. Should be spanked by him. And on top of it all. Get what he's dreamed about getting from the girl he had a crush on.
Even though is from his sister. Now that's a dream cum true

Awesome story

Love it so far. Good writing and believable characters. Really do hope you continue. Just one question if he is the escape artist when does he get tied? Or maybe that's where Amanda will come in?

That was awesome :). Might be fun to bring her friend into the mix, but if not its a great ending point! Thanks for writing it!

OMG!!!!!!

I have read hundreds of stories on Literotica and I believe that this is the hottest by far!!!!! PLEASE! Write more.

Oh my

I am not into bdsm because I just can't hurt a gal, but, damn. I think ch 4 is due to punish me for reading this kind of story.

Hanging

Like any good serial writer, you left us (or me, anyway) hanging, eager to see another chapter. Wonderful imagery and understanding of B&D and well presented.