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i like the way you turn your story and the progress in the scenario thanks
Great story
hi
I always know a story is great when I wish I had wrote it. It was sexy and teasing, and I loved th slow seduction.
Quite frankly, this story is better than my own lesbian story release yesterday...both have surprises to the seduction, but yours was more believable.
Well done
Jasmine
P.S: I would have kept nylons involved...LOL!!!!
Like it
I really enjoy this story. Good job
Wet Cunt
I like the feeling of your story, and how Candice cam in Jill mouth. I like it when a woman cums in my mouth squirting her juices out, flooding my face and mouth. It is a great feeling. Very Nice
Beautifully written story. Explicit description of the erotica. I enjoyed it, even though I don't normally read lesbian stories
well done
Great story. I too would have liked it if the women wore either stockings or pantyhose. Keep up the good work! Hope you continue this story.
Lovely
Just love high heels and red lipsticks... Wished I had been there... Thanks.
and things to go bump in the night...
OH - I wish I could have been there to watch! As much as my mind says JOIN IN! I seriously doubt I would have lasted long enough to do anything! Would LOVE to have a good squirt down the throat! M O R E !! .. M O R E !!
WONDERFUL
Loved the story
I just love stories where the subject finds their true self. Thank you.
good story
The story was good and I liked it a lot. Great job.
Mmmm....
Very well written...makes me hungry for strawberries!
Amazing
so well done!
Thank you!
L
strawberry cunt cake
Loved the story. I especially like reading about how a straight woman is made to cross over to female lesbian ways. I get so excited when I read about how it is done. It makes me remember the first time that I had sex with a girl. It is something that I will never forget or regret. Eating pussy and having my pussy eaten are the most incredible experiences of my life. The first time with a girl who was experienced in oral sex and she made me come in her mouth was so exciting for me. When she was through she kissed me and I could taste and smell my pussy on her face. It was the most wonderful feeling to be able to find out how good my pussy was.
I have eaten quite a bit of pussy but I haven't found one that compares to the way that mine tastes. I wish that I could eat my pussy but sadly I can't. I have to be content with tasting it on my girlfriend's mouth. She has told me that I taste better than anyone else who she has eaten. I can't agree with her more.
Thanks for the story. I look forward to reading more from you
Lol Betsy
Excellent
Loved the story and the usual build up you deliver,
What happened to Nancy, would love to have known the feelings between them two.
Keep you your fantastic writing.
Great Read
Good Job! Was left totally wanting more of this story.
Thank you for sharing your talents.
Doc
Very cleverly written
This is a fabulous scenario with great characters and vivid descriptions. I enjoyed Jill's reticence and denial of what she truly wanted to the point that she almost let it slip away. Would indeed like to see more from these characters in the future. Well done!
so hot
wonderful thank you for this story
PERFECTION!!!
All I can say is OH MY GOD ! That was one of the best stories I have ever read. Thank you so much for that, It gave me and my girl friend the best day ever during and after reading it.
WOW
Fantastic story
Awesome!
I loved this story. You did a wonderful job on the characters and the set up.
great story. more.
would like to read more about Candice andher company.
sublime
magic in the words
More of it!
I would love to read much more parts of your gorgeous "Red Lipstick" lesbian series. Your stories are just great and well developed.
Greetings from a German fan!
YUMMY!
That was a hot story! The "High Heels, Red Lipstick" series is one of my very favorites! You painted vivid, erotic pictures, which stimulated my imagination! I kept think, "Gee, I'd like to meet Candice or Jill or Nancy! I'd be a good little sub, too!" I like that eventhough Candice was a Domme, she treated Nancy and Jill with kindness. The slave collar was the only thing that creaped me out a bit! Not into that. But your story was very erotic and sensual, and I love the follow ups to this! Excellent writing! -Curiousshell
Omg
This story had great interest n kept me intrigued besides being quite wet. I like hope you continue the red lipstick series into more down the line. Thank you again n very awesome writing.
I was very surprised by this one
I am 61 years old. As a child, one of my jobs (along with my older sister), was to wash dishes (back then EVERY house had a dishwasher, they were called kids!) after each meal. My mother like all women during that time wore mostly red lipstick. And back then there was none of this "always stays on lipstick". So my mother's coffee cups, tea glass, everything had that nasty lipstick on it. I grew to really hate lipstick and still do to this day. I can't stand to see a woman wearing lipstick. So as I read this story I almost stopped reading when the lipstick came out. but I am glad I kept reading. It is a good story (once I got past the lipstick)!
Very nice story!
Another great story in your High Heels, Red Lipstick series! Thanks for sharing them with us!
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