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Rushed, slow down, this would have been much better if it was more fleshed out, also proof read out loud to your self and you'll notice missing words like "And I don't to lose you either", should read "And I don't WANT to lose you either." Keep trying.
too short for romance
This is what is called a flash story here.
Flash stories are fine for a quickie between strangers or long time lovers, but for a couple getting together like these two there should be more.
A romance story is all about the build-up to them getting together, most of which you have already happened "off stage" in the story.
Short****
But to the point. Thanks for sharing.
Good short story
Realistic situation and feelings. Often "friends" do not want to admit true feelings. It is better to take a chance that regret it.
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