If this is an indicator of your dom viewpoint for real interactions, I can only hope you are careful in your sub choices. They had better be like minded from the start. Forcing any of this on someone who only wants to please could cause serious damage. And before the it's only fantasy squad starts up, shut up yourselves. Authors can and do show their true self in stories as well as totally make shit up.
Tags for enemas, eating puke, brutal ass fucking, pee and be a poor dom.
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Anonymous03/22/15
Not BDSM
This is non consent not bdsm. Its stories like this that give bdsm a bad name. This kind of treatment can cause serious emotional damage to a submissive.
As a first time author on Literotica, I am grateful for the comments. Unlike my first story, this one seems to have hit a sour note with readers.
I should explain. This story is obviously a fantasy, but also rooted in my own experiences as a suby girl before I found being a dom more rewarding. I didn't eat puke off the floor (but I once licked some of my own at my dom's insistence).
The Mentos-Coke enema was real, but my dom was careful to insert only a few Mentos, using an anal hole spreader, then slowly poured in Coke (what a sensation!). A whole enema bag full of dissolved Mentos would probably be dangerous, but I would have tried it back then. At the very least, it is fun to fantasize about it!
The scenario of the sub being humiliated in front of her enemies happened to me, just not as extreme as depicted in my story. I guess that over time, my imagination has gotten the better of me, and the narrative evolved into something far more powerful.
Finally, let me assure everyone that my dom would have stopped the instant I shook my head "No" or used our safe word. I didn't mean to imply that the sub in this story had not given her full consent to the events.
Again, thanks for the insights! I will use them to guide in the creation of my next story.
English
If this is an indicator of your dom viewpoint for real interactions, I can only hope you are careful in your sub choices. They had better be like minded from the start. Forcing any of this on someone who only wants to please could cause serious damage. And before the it's only fantasy squad starts up, shut up yourselves. Authors can and do show their true self in stories as well as totally make shit up.
Tags for enemas, eating puke, brutal ass fucking, pee and be a poor dom.
Not BDSM
This is non consent not bdsm. Its stories like this that give bdsm a bad name. This kind of treatment can cause serious emotional damage to a submissive.
Appreciate feedback
As a first time author on Literotica, I am grateful for the comments. Unlike my first story, this one seems to have hit a sour note with readers.
I should explain. This story is obviously a fantasy, but also rooted in my own experiences as a suby girl before I found being a dom more rewarding. I didn't eat puke off the floor (but I once licked some of my own at my dom's insistence).
The Mentos-Coke enema was real, but my dom was careful to insert only a few Mentos, using an anal hole spreader, then slowly poured in Coke (what a sensation!). A whole enema bag full of dissolved Mentos would probably be dangerous, but I would have tried it back then. At the very least, it is fun to fantasize about it!
The scenario of the sub being humiliated in front of her enemies happened to me, just not as extreme as depicted in my story. I guess that over time, my imagination has gotten the better of me, and the narrative evolved into something far more powerful.
Finally, let me assure everyone that my dom would have stopped the instant I shook my head "No" or used our safe word. I didn't mean to imply that the sub in this story had not given her full consent to the events.
Again, thanks for the insights! I will use them to guide in the creation of my next story.
--Alaisiagae
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