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by demure101
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Ashesh9about 9 years agoNice rhymin' word plays Dem : hedges- edges,laid-fade,ways-maze , plays-daze !!
5-ed .
pelegrinoabout 9 years agoBeautiful rhyming scheme and form. I like that you don't finish it in 3 four line stanzas but you add another 2 lines at the end which can be used as an epode! (If one wants to view it that way)
The content fills my head with questions about the determination and self confidence in entering the maze where light is of no great relevance, but I like that at the end reliance on others for a solution is admitted.
Thanks for sharing-5ed.
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