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Today at the Bookstore Pt. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/21/15

Keep writing.

I love where this is going. I hope she gets knocked up.

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by AEisMe03/22/15

Eh...

Maybe because it's just not my kink but Jack needs to just shut the fuck up. I mean, I like a good "You're a nasty whore" dirty talk like the next girl but all he ever says is misogynistic shit. She needs to shove a sock in his mouth and let his cock do the talking for him. Also, not to be one of those whiny "This is in the wrong category!?1!" people, but...yeah. It's neither non-con, nor reluct. She's totally all in by this point. You write well and I look forward to more chapters.

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by Anonymous04/04/15

keep writing!

i love this so much!

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