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by lemonheads03/24/15

Another very good chapter, as long as the couples stay exclusive to each other the story will continue to be good. Can't wait to read what happens next

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by ChasB03/24/15

Dry.

A bit dry, if you know what I mean. Could have used more descriptive detail about Kevin an Jane's first time. It was over and done before my mind got into it. Same with John and Mary.

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