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Lovebird's Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/06/07

ummm

i liked the story line, it just wasn't well written

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by Anonymous04/24/14

LAY

IT IS NOT LAY .IT IS LIE.YOU ARE NOT ALONE FOR 99% OF AMERICANS ON HERE GET THEM WRONG

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by rightbank07/20/14

really stiff language

tiny little flash story that is stilted.

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by Bestreading12/08/14

More

Continue... I would like

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