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The Original Sin Ch. 01

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by Anonymous03/24/15

More please.

Hope to read more of this story!

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by Anonymous03/24/15

I hope for more of this story and hope she gets even with them all cause seems she knew the blond and of course knew william

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by outofshadows03/30/15

update

A big "thank you" to readers who took the time to comment and leave feedback through the comment section or through private messages.
For readers interested in the original story, please do check out "A Step Into Darkness" by Judith Loewe on Amazon Kindle. It's part of a 5 book series.

In the midst of writing chapter 2 as an alternative story for Marguerite. The category might change but hopefully the story won't disappoint. Thanks for the suggestions regarding the revenge angle for Marguerite. Will be working on that angle for this alternative story. Looking to post chapter 2 soon!

Follow me on twitter (@judith_loewe) and via my blog (http://judithloewe.blogspot.com)!

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