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Beautiful and sensual!

Thank you so much hun!

the use of the question as a refrain is good, , you could probably cut back a fair bit of this, condense it to increase the impact.

using "my" so many times could be taken out, I keep trying to re-write it problem is then it would be the way I would write it and that is only a guide anyway. If you would like me to show you what I mean let me know.

Very steamy.