All Comments on 'Yesterday Afternoon As Usual...'

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ender2k2kender2k2kabout 9 years ago
The story was good, but...

She changed from girlfriend to wife and back in the story. The story has a fun idea.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 9 years ago
Fun start!

The wife or gf three me at first but I liked the idea. Hope to see what happens when Samantha gets home!

lookingformistresslookingformistressabout 9 years agoAuthor
@ To the readers

^ Sorry about that mistake guys, I have corrected it and submitted another version named Yesterday. I am not sure how I can edit the version that is already submitted...

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