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Interesting!
You write very well. I enjoyed your story very much. The spelling and grammar is impeccable (no distractions) and there is a fantastic probability to the entire idea. Nice work.
Your very best yet!!!
Having read many of your stories, I would rank this as the best one ever! Why?
It is nice and compact--in a word succinct.
The entire situation is completely plausible.
Both characters seem to learn a lesson about themselves, sadly, she more than he.
There is some light, in the form of hope, at the end of the tunnel, for the lovers.
Aloha,
Glenn from Hawaii
Sweet.
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