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Very erotic
Interesting trade for tires. Could have been much worse but she did a deed that I could have seen happening .... Hopefully she will never see the tow truck driver again would hate to see what he would want for a transmission...
very good writing and story for first time,, it was exciting to be put back into that time .. i feel they may not have had front hooking bras back then but you would know, better than me ..
1969 - not the dark ages
Of course there were front opening bras in 1969! I opened such a device more than once before then!
1969 - not the dark ages
Of course there were front opening bras in 1969! I opened such a device more than once before then!
Just thanks
Thanks for reading the story. Thank you who commented and favored it. I would like to hear any comments.
More
I want there to be more about the couple
Great Story!
This was a very down-to-earth, gritty and realistic story that dealt well with very complex emotions in an erotic way. The rough and nearly forced sex scene with the mechanic was well prefaced by explaining the young couple´s sex life wherein the wife was the leader in exploring new things and she wanted rougher sex. Also, her stripping and masturbating while they drove was hot…and I can imagine that ride in the 1965 Falcon.
The writer also nicely set up how dirt poor this young couple really was and that they didn´t have the $50 for the tow and a tire. This naturally led to the wife negotiating sex for roadside assistance and tires.
This was a little like willingly consenting to be raped, which is nearly what ensued. The sex scenes were graphic, colorful, and highlighted the young wife´s unwanted but very erotic orgasmic responses. The fact that the wife took the lead and willingly started to negotiate with the tow truck driver was a very significant point and it tied back in with her desire for rough sex.
Already having a young baby, the woman is a proven breeder and pregnancy risk added to the erotic tension. The final two paragraphs were brilliant and touched a lot of emotions, especially when the young husband had a hard on because she had been fucked by another and he also wanted to feel her used pussy. I have a feeling their sex life is going to change from now on!
Is Lisa pregnant? Is she now going to need rough sex, maybe even with other men? We need a sequel! Keep writing!
Thank you.
I wasn't sure anyone got that the times were desperate. Maybe I will add more . I love comments good or bad. Feel free to contact me.
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