All Comments on 'Jenny'

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lonelyQuadlonelyQuadabout 9 years ago
nice one

i love both of your characters and would enjoy reading more about them...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Very Nice

I agree with Lonely Quad........more would be good !!!

sandymonroesandymonroeabout 9 years ago

Nice, coherent and detailed text. I liked it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great job.

Nice story. Many stories here only satisfy the sex drive, but yours here also satisfy that part that wants to experience what it feels like to be with a girlfriend. Your story is like the complete girlfriend experience.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great stuff

Romantic and erotic. Jenny is a person I would love to lose my virginity to her if I was still a virgin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

This is like a terrible porn script

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosalmost 9 years ago
Sweet, and gently erotic

a welcome change of pace from the usual fare here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Amazing Work

I love your work, first "Chrissy" now "Jenny" keep it up

auguy86auguy86almost 8 years ago
Still my favorite...

Over a year posted on the site, and this is still my favorite erotic short story ever. Its beauty is in its simplicity; it's as pure a story as I've read. Many returns to this one are in the future.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 7 years ago
Ah another very nice story

Somehow I stumbled into this author on Lit. I am finding this author's stories verity entertaing and enjoyable to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What A Delicious Fantasy <3

This was a very pleasant, heartwarming story and I suspect I'll come back to it again and again. The couple was believable and the roommate was a lifesaver. Great, immersive writing overall. Thank you for putting out such a wonderful, uplifting story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Nice story. Would have been better with more of a build up of the romance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story, but deserves more chapters.

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