All Comments on 'Becoming Mindy'

This story is well written, embraces real feelings of a gurl starting out, and leaves this reader wanting more. So hot and thrilling for this reader. Thanks.

...Was a very nicely written piece of fiction. Well done dialog highlights this initial offering, along with a compendiary storyline that keeps a focus on action.

Great story, Mindy. I love how you walk the delicate balance between the desire for the physically forceful, and the need for some sweetness and tenderness.

Wow, you grabbed in the beginning and pulled us into some hot erotica. I'm glad you found yourself and doubly glad you are sharing the naughty bits with us.

I love it when a married man feeds me his cock and fucks my man-pussy. His wife isn't giving him blowjobs anymore, so I will gladly do it for him. Also, when he fucks my man-cunt from behind it reminds him that his wife won't let him fuck her ass, so I give him my ass to fuck -- and I love it !!!! Letting a married man cum inside my man-pussy is even more wonderful as I love pleasing my male lovers and letting them "breed" me. I become their mistresses, which really turn them on. I can't wait to read the next chapters of your story.

I am a male take belong to a older man as his girly bitch boy it happen one day I was at his house and I was washing out some clothes he came in well I see you doing house work I said yes its raining out so I just thought of washing some clothes he ask will I do his laundry I told bring them here I will I just pull out some wet clothes and he saw the panties he look and smile he left and came back I had the panties on the line as he walk by me he slap my ass as a joke and said nice ass girly he slap it again I just smile and said thanks I did his wash and then fold the clothes as I put them a way I had to bend a bit to put his underwear away he came in as I was bend over he saw my thong panties he just walk up and put his hand on my ass I did not move he rub his hand all over my ass he got my pants down a bit now he saw my pink thong panties he move his hand all around my ass I undone my pants and move my ass so my pants fell down then I could feel his cock I always want to feel a cock in my ass he saw what I was doing he told me if I take your panties I will shove my cock in your pussy ass hole and be my bitch I told him if that what you want then go a head after that night I became his bitch and never left the house for a few month then it happen he brought other men home and I was there bitch too and I soon had breasts like a girl he told me now you are my slave bitch just then he came over to me and ripe my blouse off and hand me a sexy nightie two men was there and I knew what I was going to do I had both men that night and now I live as a house slave

I crossdress and my boyfriend always cums up my ass bareback. I get so horny that cum pretty fast the first time without my cock being touched. After I cum, he can play with my cock and make me cum again before he shoots his load in me. I love feeling his hard cock in me while I cum!

I know what you mean about that anal orgasm. When he takes viagra, he can stay hard and keep fucking me after he cums. It's great because his second orgasm can take a lot longer and he can fuck me for a long time. I usually go soft after cumming twice but, when he fucks me for a long time like that, I can usually have an anal orgasm.

I'm usually soft after I cum two times, but it feels like there are these little electric vibrations in my cock. I sometime enjoy a penis probe and I imagine that feels like what the probe would feel like if it was sticky and was sliding out with super fast little sticky vibrations. It doesn't hurt, it feels really great! When I feel that, as I start to orgasm, no cum comes out, just lots of clear precum drools from my dick. The orgasm comes deep from my insides, my whole body goes rigid, starts to spasm and convulse, my sphincter clamps down in orgasmic spasms on his cock, I get a rushing sound in my head, my vision grays out and I feel like I am going to pass out! After I regain my senses, I'm limp as a rag doll until he shoots his load up my ass. It's so intense and has to be the most fantastic feeling in the world!

Riki

make as you , would love to learn you :)