All Comments on 'Voice Activated Ch. 03'

Awesome story, could you make him the most powerful of them all, with new abilities like teleporting, telekeineses & maybe flying. With more pages

Loads of potential with this storyline. Excited to see what comes next.

You have the beginnings of a profitable novel here. Chapter length is about right. Plotline just oozes possibilities. I look forward to the next confrontation, perhaps with a bit of Dominance thrown in as Mike exerts his strength.

While I don't have a novel length story in mind, I agree that the world has a lot of possibilities. And I'm think of exploring some of those in other, separate, chapters later. Gotta get through Mike's story first though.

Finished reading your story and I'm impressed I hope you have more in the Future. It would be interesting to find out Who is the Real Bad Guys and who is the Future for Him.

I really enjoyed this story. I second the other readers when saying that this could become a novel or novella. If so, though, needs some proofing. Fantastic storyline, though, good arch, well-developed characters. Bravo

I love this series. I want more of it! Thank you for the start of this series but I want more.

More Please! I <3 u!

thanks for the chapters, this has some awesome potential. Good luck getting the inspiration for more chapters.

Very nice story

I hate waiting for the next chapter, but I guess since I can't write, I'm at the mercy of those who can. (But would it hurt to get an editor?)

Please write more quick. It is torture waiting like this

I enjoyed this story despite the sex acts being over too quick or too many details of sexual techniques being glossed over - but that's just my prediliction for savoring sex acts and not rushing thru them.

I'm looking forward to reading more chapters in this saga (long story).

Please tell me your not leaving voice activated like that please say there is much more coming I really enjoyed it so far I beg you to carry it on

Thank you

More chapters, one of the best I've read.

Great series. As with many others, I have to ask for more! It seems that the author has not posted a new story in some time so my hope is that they are working on the next chapter in this series. Even outside of the sex, there has been created a fascinating world, of which, I want to know more. Here is to hoping that there will be more to come. Again, great work.

Great story so far. Really excited for what comes next.

This is an awesome story so far that has the potential to be one of the best on this site. Please keep writing! I am dying to know more!

Another greate story that turns out to be shit because it stops. To Many stories end with no end

1 star for not finishing the story. 15 months since last chapter.

I'm not gutless I sign in before leaving comments.

I found this series really interesting....wish the author would have kept going with it.

Guess you got bored with this line. Wish you would have carried on

Why stop? Had the potential to be very interesting.

Wish you had continued with this.

Please come back and finish this, it really deserves to be.

Absolutely love this work! Would love to see it continued.

Are you go to finish this story it's great.

Seems like the good ones, and yours is, never get finished. What a pity.

Heartbreaking to find such a promising story abandoned.

Loved the story but seams it won't be finished too bad was a good one.

Why let his women fuck others... sigh theyre his.. this is not domination..

A very good story again without being finished.

Are you OK healthwise? Since you left this story a cliffhanger, I figured you must be ill or worse...

I really liked the story. I hope you will finish this story and not leave your readers hanging.

Ok so I read all three of these. I absolutely enjoyed the line of this and definitely hope that all these years later you will revisit this and continue the story. I admit that when I checked the dates I was very disappointed to see that you walked away when there was so much more to go in this. Wish you all the best!

It looked like it was just picking up with a decent start to an interesting plot. But I guess it was abandoned. Too bad :(