All Comments on 'A Secretary Changed Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Promising. Please, more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

To be continued?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more of it

Add interracial for Jenna to shock her sensibilities and stretch her horizons plus make amends for past racism. Involve Mrs Anders in her training and hers too in doing things together. Both interracial sexing and unconditional lesbianism target goals. Wardrobe changes and butch hairdo for both sexes. Long term plan is her,sisters to change lifestyles into becoming more submissive servants bto all comers.

subslutjennasubslutjennaabout 9 years agoAuthor
thank you...

Thank you all for reading my story...believe it or not it's my first!

The next chapter?...I'm editing it right now..stay tuned! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Please hurry

I am looking for your story everyday. Miss Jane should take her time and really make the secretary into a wonderful little sub plaything for both Becca and Miss Jane. Dress her as a little girl for the training.

Great job with your first story.

sub_peachiessub_peachiesabout 9 years ago
Thank you for sharing

Looking forward to reading what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

your overuse of commas distracts from an otherwise very good story. Please have someone edit for grammar and punctuation in the future!

Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
Smoking

Off too a real steamy start. 5🌟's 😍

DemonikWolfeDemonikWolfeover 2 years ago

Perfect start. I am hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please keep our heroine's outer clothes unchanged, so that only her Mistress knows that she has been invisibly re-modelled and liberated during her absence... No doubt Becca will remain quiet as directed?

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