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A Question of Cumming Ch. 05

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by Anonymous03/26/15

Too many errors

Please get an editor or read the story aloud to yourself before submitting it and you'll find the errors.
Otherwise, your story is very erotic and has a unusual premise. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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