You have my interest. Bring on part two.
You have my interest for now.....bring on chapter 2
STARTED NOW TELL US MORE
Lisa has opened up a real opportunity here and Tom and her brother can help her get off in more ways !! You should describe Lisa in more detail as well as the boys........ this could get very interesting !! Thanks.
Looking forward to Ch 2.
Please carry on with Lisa & tom & leave your stepmother for chapter 3.
agree withlast comment continue with main do not care about stepmother atthis time.
continue ASAP
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Very Good!!
You have my interest. Bring on part two.
I agree......
You have my interest for now.....bring on chapter 2
YOU HAVE IT
STARTED NOW TELL US MORE
Lisa has opened up a real opportunity here and Tom and her brother can help her get off in more ways !! You should describe Lisa in more detail as well as the boys........ this could get very interesting !! Thanks.
More please!!!!
Looking forward to Ch 2.
More Lisa & Tom
Please carry on with Lisa & tom & leave your stepmother for chapter 3.
great start
agree withlast comment continue with main do not care about stepmother atthis time.
nice start
continue ASAP
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