All Comments on 'Atonement or Exorcism?'

The position after Horst said "You want it, you got it" sounds great. Note to self: try that sometime. Overall, interesting choice for someone who wants to atone. If planes can fly to Europe, they can fly to Australia, LOL. The things we tell ourselves ...

I'm not going to rate this one right now. Maybe the next time I read it, I will. It's well written, as your stories always are, and I think I care about both the characters. Just not sure I like your protagonist. I sort of think I respect Horst more than...the other guy, whatever his name is. Funny--I didn't catch his name. I only remember Cal and Horst. My reaction to this story is feeling sort of odd--want to think about it for a while.

plt darling Ive ccum again to your wonderful writing. Dreaming of sucking you!