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Atonement or Exorcism?

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by geemeedee03/24/15

Nice.

The position after Horst said "You want it, you got it" sounds great. Note to self: try that sometime. Overall, interesting choice for someone who wants to atone. If planes can fly to Europe, they can fly to Australia, LOL. The things we tell ourselves ...

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by Anonymous03/24/15

Rating...?

I'm not going to rate this one right now. Maybe the next time I read it, I will. It's well written, as your stories always are, and I think I care about both the characters. Just not sure I like your protagonist. I sort of think I respect Horst more than...the other guy, whatever his name is. Funny--I didn't catch his name. I only remember Cal and Horst. My reaction to this story is feeling sort of odd--want to think about it for a while.

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by Anonymous12/07/16

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plt darling Ive ccum again to your wonderful writing. Dreaming of sucking you!

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