Necromancer Chronicles Pt. 01

Please continue

Great Start

Keep it coming

I like it a lot please keep writing

i like it

It's not quite like the story by intrepid fate, but you definitely have talent and I hope you continue.

grrrrrrreeeeeeeaaaaaaatttttt

5 stars
great that you are back now try to be regular
Or atleast post regular updates

Very nice beginning. Some problems with spelling, etc., but most were easy to slide over. I'll be looking for the next chapter.

It is a moral imperative that you write much more on this!!!

Pretty please with sugar on top!

I love the 'urban fantasy' genre and you've done a great job with laying the character groundwork! Hopefully you'll continue this series post haste!!

Fantastic!

What a great story so far! I personally love fantasy stories with necromancers; I'm so glad there's another one now, as they're kind of rare. I guess there's only so much one can write about the deathly arts. Please continue this great saga!

Awesome!

Keep it up I need many more chapters.

A very good start

Looking forward to wherever you take this story!

Interesting start

Interesting start to a series

I like it

Very interesting combo your creating here. Half demon necro plus half angel witch. I bet there is some sparks happening when those 2 meet. Hope you continue the story.

Oh My Gosh!

Seriously incredible! I got lost in this story! Tell me you will make a novel of this please! There are some minor adjustments needed of course but I'm honestly so in love I can't stand it! Marry me? No joke. I'm down on one knee for you. I need you. You are my soulmate.
Keep this amazing story going, for all of us.

Thank you

Its very nice to read a necromancer story after a long time..i hope you will write many more chapters in this story shortly. Please consider to post updates on the chapters to come

nice start

I generallry like necromancer stories, and this has put another spin on my imagination. I look foward to next chapter

Very nice.

Please continue, developing a long interesting story.

Great Setup!

I really admire how you framed your story in this way. It got all the characters moving and conveyed information quickly without resorting to annoyingly blatant info dumps.
I often think how fast a story gets interesting is a good metric for how good it is. I don't usually read a story while it only has one part out because once my interest is peeked I find it hard to wait. But if you want feedback I will say this, I can already tell I will probably reread this story 2-3 more times. It has the right kind of makeup for reread value. It touches on a lot of ideas.
The one good thing about reading an unfinished story is that if it has a good start then it has a lot of potential, that is fun to think about what might happen, in a way that seems more real than speculating on a story that is already completed and set in stone.
As for the no f/f m/f/f that is a little disappointing because that stuff is hot but I can see how the dynamic you are setting up lends its self to just m/f. It is probably easier to flesh out a full on romantic infatuation between two characters then for 3+ though I have read plenty of stories that pull that off too.

Great Story!

I sincerely hope this story is finished. I think it's a great story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

enjoyed this story very much please continue

Great start, enjoyed the read and I'm looking forward to the next.

Moreeee

When is the next chapter I can't wait this long for such a good story, it has soo much potential.

Great start!

Waiting for more!

great work keep writing!!!

great work keep writing!!!

Wonderful start

Very good concept. I would expect the great meeting to happen in the next chapter.

When would the next part be expected?

Fantastic

7 out of seven stars! Great development so far of the two main characters, and this story a great example of how literotica is not just a porn site but a grand library of art

Well written…

And briefly made me sad because it reminded me of Path of the Necromancer…

Please keep this one going!

This is a great start to a story. Someone mentioned Path of the Necromancer, but the tone reminds me more of BashfullyShameless or EvilAlpaca 's stories (which I intend as complements if that's not clear).