Revenge of the Nerd: Cheerleaders

Enjoyed it (like always)

This is an amusing story and a nice power fantasy. It is not realistic on any level, but it is fun.

Nice!

Can hardly wait for the next great chapter!

Great story.

This is one of the better mind control stories I have seen on here .A very hot read . 5 out of 5 from me .

Mom waiting in the wings

Oh my another fun Silkie Romp!!!

I'm enjoying the story, but I'm curious - Becky was sprayed but several times in the story she didn't immediately obey Brandon's suggestion, and a few times it seems like she lied (or at least didn't tell the truth), both of which seem drastically different than the way that Carrie reacted to him in both chapters. Was there a reason for this, or was it just an oversight? Not a deal breaker or anything, but it does take me out of the story when it happens.

amazing

I am loving these stories, and I can't wait for more

Thank you.

I was hoping this would be continued. Thank you for doing so. I look forward to seeing who Brandon gets next.

Please use it on mommy

Then use it on the boss and have the boss take care of their finances so the family never has to work again.

Please please please make him spray his mom, too. Maybe he gets a taste for milfs with his neighbour first, then moves on to his own mother. Or maybe he uses the spray to keep her quiet about what's going on at home with his sister?

Love it

SSL strikes again with an amazing story. :)

Absolutely loved this chapter. Felt very short but every moment sweet. The dialogue felt genuine and the dynamic between each of the characters kept things interesting. I liked Becky the most since she still has that hint of manipulative freedom despite being under control. If Brandon fell for her charm then it would get very interesting. I really liked how Brandon treats his sister as it kind of shows years of pent up (sexual) frustration. Overall excellent execution with zero fluff.

I am looking forward to what you have in store with the bully and his mom. I hope to see some cuckolding type vengeance while using the MILF. Might be fun if the drug was used to just used to bring out intentions beneath the surface rather than just overtly controlling their actions. Plenty of interesting things could be done

Keep up the good work!

Part 3 asap

please do the other two chapters soon....
also love to have a about Mom
such a hot story

Go gay

Jasmine - again a really hot story. I'd recommend you go gay with the next one. If the spray works on both sexes, it could be a great way for Brandon to explore his sexuality and fuck Mitch.

Great work. Keep it up.

-Straight but Curious

Please don't go gay

This story is great and would be ruined for a lot of reader if you add gay sex. The only time I'm disappointed when a story of yours comes out is when it is a gay one. I understand you enjoy writing them but don't start mixing gay sex in your other stories.

This story is well done and I liked how Brandon regained control when Becky tried to steal it. I'm looking forward to chapter 3 and how he is going to dose his mom. We don't know much about her so maybe she doesn't need to be a bitch. He can give her generic instructions to make her happier and she ends up wanting her son. Just a thought.

Awesome

This must continue. Please make sure he follows through on the threat of making the looser find another box to eat at school. However you proceed you need to keep these 2 sluts around. Just awesome writing.

go gay

Maybe keep it to a sorry for those who don't want it in there, but a bi humiliation aspect would be awesome.

More

Brandon, probably has a bitch for a mom as well to turn into his fuck toy, then he probably has some bitch ex-teacher to turn into his personal sluts, not to mention Becky's bitch of a mom.

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Yea... Rape and slavery, that's hot...
Fucking disgusting.

well written story

Maybe Brandon wants to be a social reformer as he sees the plight of black boys turned down by white bitches too good for them. Becky and Cassie,wull become submissive fuck toys to black studs,aided by a black bitch of a girl getting revenge for racial discrimination in social settings. Other white cheerleaders can be sucked in this mess with burning assholes. Keep on writing!

NICE

This story is fucking awesome!!! Keep it Up!!!

P.s. Please make it so that people stop "COMING" but start CUMMING. Lol, Kinda threw me off.

continuity.

He said "you will be addicted to MY cum." Not cum in general, HIS cum. I checked. Also, I thought that was a delightfully twisted idea...giving her an addiction that can only be satisfied by her own brothers cum. Sad to see that continuity error retcon that fun plot element. Nice story otherwise!
-Anubelore ;)

Please continue

So far so good! I hope you continue this "Revenge" series.

more

cant wait for more

Like when???

I want to know how long we have to wait for the next installment comes out? My guess is NEVER! I hope I'm wrong.

LOL

Hi
Not sure I love the negativity of the above statement, but Ironically part 3 is out tomorrow (May 27th)

Jasmine

Loved it

Great story. Would love more like this.

Oh my!

This is so good!

Boring as fuck.

😋

Soaking Wet