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Recruiting and Training MILFs Ch. 04

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by Boxcarbill03/26/15

Oh yeah

OK, Where do you go from here... Hmmm. Bedding mature women on a Cruise Ship??

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by WindySwimming03/26/15

Excellent!

Like the previous comment. Encourage the next chapter to be aboard a cruise ship. Although cruise lines really discourage any relationships between crew & passengers, surely there's potential for the story to continue aboard ship. Hope it happens. Good writing.

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by Notquiet06/25/15

Re-used lines from ch 3

It was a good story, but several of the lines were taken directly from the last story where he fucked Marcia. Word for word. At least rearrange the words. Maybe one of the next ones could give him a little run for his money. And he needs to pop in on the first milf and remind her who she belongs to.

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